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WIP For Balance by InvisibleJediMaster -K+

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Dubious Destiny, Jul 18, 2018.

3/5, 5 votes
  1. Dubious Destiny

    Dubious Destiny Seventh Year

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    Jul 18, 2018 #1
    Title: For Balance
    Author: InvisibleJediMaster
    Rating: K+
    Genre: Supernatural
    Status: In-Progress
    Library Category: The Alternates
    Pairings: Harry/? (None so far)
    Summary: The Mad Titan gathered the Infinity Stones to right the grievous wrongs he perceived in the universe and thus bring balance to it. Balance he received, but not in a way he could have predicted. MoD!Harry, Unhinged!Harry
    Link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12934312/1/For-Balance

    I read this story quite a while back and didn't post it because I didn't know if it was library worthy. After a similar story was posted in the review board, I decided to bring it to your attention. I put it in this section just to gauge response (before posting it to the review board).

    The story is quite short(19/07/2018); a point against it. There is not much plot, just a lot of references. Harry is a bit OOC because this is set eons from DH. It follows most MoD cliches, but the one thing which set it apart was
    ?Harry's (in)experience
    . Theme was aptly chosen(for a Avengers/ HP crossover).

    Hopefully the author will be able to maintain their standard of writing(if they continue). This reads like a oneshot, so I am not sure they will.

    Rating 3/5

    EDIT:     Mods, I am not sure if this is the correct place. Please adjust it for me.
     
    Last edited: Jul 18, 2018
  2. Zombie

    Zombie Black Philip Moderator DLP Supporter ⭐

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    Jul 18, 2018 #2
    Almost Rec is the right spot for something you don't think is library worthy but that others might enjoy. So yes, it's in an appropriate spot.
     
  3. Nazgoose

    Nazgoose The Honky-tonk ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter DLP Gold Supporter

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    Jul 22, 2018 #3
    Interesting idea and competently executed, but not nearly long enough to be rated highly. The very definition of Almost Recommendable for me.

    3/5
     
  4. Otters

    Otters Groundskeeper ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Jul 23, 2018 #4
    This is so tiny it wouldn't have gone amiss as a post in the plot bunny thread.

    Still, it was short enough that I didn't get annoyed, which I undoubtedly would have done in a longer Avengers piece. That fandom was born to be trash.

    3/5