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WIP Guardian by Black Dragon6 - M - Ranma 1/2

Discussion in 'Anime, Cartoons, and Comics' started by Glernaj, May 11, 2009.

4/5, 2 votes
  1. Glernaj

    Glernaj Stab Executive DLP Supporter

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    May 11, 2009 #1
    Title - Guardian
    Author - Black Dragon6
    Rating - M
    Pairing - N/A
    Summary - Ranma leaves Nerima and joins a special police force. Special in that it's made up of psychos, fools, and nymphomaniacs all charged with protecting Tokyo from the supernatural and terrorist forces that plague its streets.
    Link - http://www.fanfiction.net/s/720841/1/Guardian

    It's really quite a bit better than the summary makes it sound. In all actuality, it's closer to being an original fiction, except it takes elements from so many other stories. Quite funny and over the top.
     
  2. Kensington

    Kensington Denarii Host DLP Supporter

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    May 11, 2009 #2
    Black Dragon paces his stories just like Rumiko Takahashi, as in while events take place very little changes in the way of characters. Funny things happen - but this story just goes on and on and on and on.

    It was impressive that I could enjoy the story while reading it considering that virtually every character sans Ranma is an OC. That said, I didn't feel like I was reading a story, more of a log of what happened to the characters. Yes, there are overall villians and plots, but it didn't feel like there was an overall theme and method to the story. Which I don't like.

    3/5.

    P.S. Go update Yagami 1/2.