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Complete Last Child of Krypton: Redux by Chuckman - T - NGE/Superman

Discussion in 'Evangelion' started by Celestin, May 6, 2012.

4.8000001907349/5, 10 votes
  1. Celestin

    Celestin Dimensional Trunk

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    May 6, 2012 #1
    Title: Last Child of Krypton: Redux
    Author: Chuckman
    Rating: T
    Genre: Adventure/Sci-Fi
    DLP Category: Other Fandoms/General
    Pairing: possible Shinji/Asuka, but the author have yet to decide if there will be any at all
    Chapters: 19
    Words: 230,178
    Updated: August 2, 2012
    Published: January 7, 2012
    Status: Complete
    Summary: Doomed planet. Desperate scientists. Last hope.
    Link: fanfiction.net

    It's rewrite of Last Child of Krypton. As I mentioned in the other thread, in the previous version the author made a mistake with adding too much elements from DC comics and rushing the ending.

    This time it seems that he is more careful with the focus of the story and lets it move with its own pace.

    Right now I give it a strong 5/5 and hope that this time the quality will stay high for the whole fic.


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  2. Another Empty Frame

    Another Empty Frame Fake Flamingo DLP Supporter

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    May 6, 2012 #2
    Convinced me to read..
     
  3. Fiat

    Fiat The Chosen One DLP Supporter

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    May 8, 2012 #3
    Read it last night and forgot to leave a review. Genuinely good fic, and I can't wait for more. Definitely deserves to be in the library. 5/5
     
  4. Nauro

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    May 8, 2012 #4
    It is interesting and consistent, but there is something lacking for it to be a top ranking story.
    For me, was somewhere at 3.75/5 Still, there is place for growth and I will be returning some time in the future to look at the progress.

    Having glanced at the previous version, there is definite improvement, and the story now is enjoyable, compared to being readable before.
    Still, not a perfect one yet.
     
  5. Dark Minion

    Dark Minion Bright Henchman DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    May 8, 2012 #5
    Actually, yes, it did.

    I am not that far in yet, so I won't rate it for now, but what I read so far managed to draw me in.