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Dead Link Memories Returned by lillyseyes - T

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Mordecai, Nov 19, 2005.

  1. Mordecai

    Mordecai Drunken Scotsman –§ Prestigious §– DLP Supporter

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    Title: Memories Returned
    Author: lillyseyes
    Rating: t
    Genre: General
    Status: WIP
    Summary: The summer after the Deparment of Mysteries battle is a hard one for Harry, with many surprises for he and his friends - my try at Severitus -
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2364727/1/

    I found this fic a while ago, and have been following it ever since. It is very good at the start, but it starts to loose quality about half way through the current chapters.
     
  2. LT2000

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    LMAO...no offense, but you seem to have some unfortunate knack for posting the types of fics that are almost universally despised around here. First a Harry/Ginny and now a Severitus. Really I wonder why we have this Severus section when just about everybody hates the stories that fall under it.
     
  3. Mordecai

    Mordecai Drunken Scotsman –§ Prestigious §– DLP Supporter

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    may i first say that I did point out on The Cracked Resevoir topic, that it being harry/ginny was one of the downsides of the fic.

    If you dislike Severitus fics so much, then what are you doing looking through the sectiont that is going to contain them?

    And if you have a section that is for them, then you can expect for them to get posted from time to time. I have seen NO rule that is against the posting of such fics.

    Mordecai

    ~is starting to get highly annoyed~
     
  4. Zevrillion

    Zevrillion Founder Retired Staff

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    I find the some Severtus can be quite good such as Not Myself by Saerry Snape but it was a very long time sense I read one.
     
  5. LT2000

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    I couldn't stand that fic. Harry's street rat accent irked me. I couldn't read past like the second chapter.
     
  6. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    there are a few decent serveritis fics... few and far between but there there.... and might i suggest mord... dun take what we say so seriously... we exagerate things ALOT.. youd think if we ran the world H/G would earn you a death sentence... we dont like it *shrugs* nothing to it... if we arent brutally honest about how much it sucks... we exagerate and poke fun... just lighten up and go with the flow and well get along great...



    (if no ones notice i ish in good mood... went out to dinner earlier... had a few magaritas and spent a little.... *cough* quality time with a ... *cough* friend.... so dun mind my ramblings... ive still not got my bearings yet )
     
  7. Lord Ravenclaw

    Lord Ravenclaw DLP Overlord Admin DLP Supporter

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    I myself like well written Severitus fics. Yes, it's true, however it has to be something without romance between them...only father/son, mentor, friends, etc.. Somehow, I can see them getting along well (providing Harry smarts up a bit).
     
  8. Rahkesh Asmodaeus

    Rahkesh Asmodaeus THUNDAH Bawd Admin DLP Supporter

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    I don't like Severitus very much, seeing as how it's not plausible that Lily would screw around with a greasy-haired DE. But, I don't mind fics in which Snape is a mentor, or even a father-figure to Harry. I mean, A Year Like None Other is good, even though the author is kind of a...bitch? Yeah, let's go with that.
     
  9. realmess

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    :twisted: :p nevermind Seraph, I like severitus, though prefer it to be mentor too. *shrugs* being normal wasn't in the requirements when I registered here, come to think of it it would be against the unsaid rules.

    I like it but not a lot. I like AYLN by Aspen... [damn those long nicks] much more, or the whole 'somewhere I belong' series by shadowarwen [which has a bonus for Sirius being alive].
    yes, I agree that it looses its quality in the later chapters.
    8/mess
     
  10. Amerision

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    Sending up for review.