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Abandoned The Prodigal Daughter by iluvfanfics1 - NC 17

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by krpton, May 25, 2010.

1.3125/5, 16 votes
  1. krpton

    krpton Squib

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    May 25, 2010 #1
    Title: The prodigal daughter
    Author: iluvfanfics1
    Category: Romance
    Rating: NC17
    Ship: HP/GW
    Summary: Four years ago, Ginny Weasley left England to find herself. Now she's back and with a few surprises. Four years ago, Harry Potter let Ginny walk away without telling her the truth. Will he be able to be honest with her this time?

    Link:- http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3227627/1/The_Prodigal_Daughter


    Very well written but it does fall back into famous fluffy cliches later on. Even though this ship is not the favorite of DLP members i chose to put it here due the top notch writing and really well written plot line(& smutty parts).


    The smut is not rushed in and follows a decent pace, the plot is well thought out and is definitely approaching some where, the down side is it falls on some cliches later on mostly associated to hp/gw genres but what makes it worthwhile is the different approach the author takes towards their soul bonds.

    Pretty average fic considering its abandoned and not been updated for a long time. id rate it 2/5 for the plot and the well thought out smut scenes :p
     
  2. DarkAizen

    DarkAizen Professor DLP Supporter

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    May 25, 2010 #2
    Uhh. You should recommend stories that you believe have 4 to 5 stars.

    Also Harry/Ginny? Also Abandoned?

    DO NOT WANT!
     
  3. vlad

    vlad Banned ~ Prestige ~

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    May 27, 2010 #3
    Shitty fic, shitty grammar, and claims to be from Kenya.

    Where have I seen this before...
     
  4. Riversong

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    Jun 7, 2010 #4
    Super-powerful Ginny & Harry? How the hell is this supposed to be good?! More than that- It's abandoned!

    1/5- a point for the smut.
     
  5. Salah

    Salah Card Captored and buttsecksed

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    Jul 3, 2010 #5
    You rate this a two? I wouldn't even give it that. Terrible plot, bad grammar, smut scenes written by a two year old. Did I say it was FUCKING ABANDONED? No? Fuck you.

    Besides, it has Ginny in it.

    1/5 doesn't even belong in the recycling bin.

    Don't post this shit on DLP.

    EDIT: The shit you read is terrible. 'Lonly as dey mayb Cum 2 me agan Inotha lif 4 ill di sun Cuz u nt her & im nt der Mai we b demns Of Imortl Gofik' An actual fucking quote. Don't EVER recommend story's again. If someone cannot take the time to learn proper English then I cannot take the time to read their sh￾it. Besides, it's fucking slash and its not even written good.

    I don't know which is worse. Bitch!Ginny! and Weak!Harry, or Dominate!Draco and Submissive!Harry?

    A good author doesn't make internet acronyms in a book.
     
    Last edited: Jul 3, 2010
  6. Korisovra

    Korisovra Headmaster

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    Aug 15, 2010 #6
    Wait...What!? Not even going to bother haranguing this rec. Gotta be a troll or some sort of fangurl infiltration. In other words, go fuck yourself with a rusty wooden spork.

    Abandoned: -1
    Ginny centric: -1
    Fluff: -1
    Ginny-as-a-goddess: -1
    Choppy writing style: -1
    Boring as hell: -1
    Softcore Porn with a ginger: -1

    So...off the top of my head it's a -2 without even trying to dig too far into it.
     
    Last edited: Aug 15, 2010
  7. Otters

    Otters Groundskeeper ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Aug 15, 2010 #7
    If this had dinosaurs in it, I would consider giving it a 1/5.