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The Rise of the Dark Mark by Chiron - T - WIP

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Void Sorcerer, May 4, 2007.

2.6666700839996/5, 6 votes
  1. Void Sorcerer

    Void Sorcerer Groundskeeper

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    May 4, 2007 #1
    Title: The Rise of the Dark Mark
    Author: chiron
    Rating: 15
    Genres: Horror/Dark, Action/Adventure, Angst
    DLP Category: Probably General
    Pairing: Harry/Ginny Ron/Hermione<O:p
    Status: In progress
    Summary: With the death of Albus Dumbledore, the magical world is thrown into a storm of chaos. There is turmoil in the Muggle world and terror grips the magical. There is no one now to stop Lord Voldemort and the minions of the Dark Mark....<O:p

    except one​

    Link: http://www.harrypotterfanfiction.com/viewstory.php?psid=207142

    This is a very nice read that I found; it currently has 14 chapters and is at 80,324 words. It's got some nice action, some good ideas and some great things going for it. Add to that a Voldemort who actually does something and is causing it to rain hellfire....well you got to read it!

    <O:pThe pairing yes the despised Harry/Ginny but as for right now, you can ignore it as she goes back to Hogwarts while Harry is off with Ron and Hermione. Take that into account with the fact that he refuses to take her with them, and it doesn't seem so bad anymore. <O:p

    Like I said, it got some action. It's got the mystery, and it’s got some character death that we all love and enjoy.

    <O:pMy rating, 4.85/5 highly recommended!

    Edit: Sorry I completly forgot. Is is there now<O:p
     
    Last edited: May 4, 2007
  2. SmileOfTheKill

    SmileOfTheKill Magical Amber

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    May 4, 2007 #2
    No link and a massive amount of smiles you made.
    Fix your post, please!
     
  3. Aekiel

    Aekiel Angle of Mispeling ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    May 5, 2007 #3
    I don't like it. Its boring.

    Seems kinda stale the whole 2 chapters I read, it details emotions in a clinical way, without any real feeling. Plus the layout makes it seem disjointed.

    Aekiel
     
  4. raja

    raja Fourth Year

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    May 5, 2007 #4
    i just started skimming over the first little bit. The writing seems pretty good but I don't know about the plot it could be ok or it cvould suck really badly. I'll edit when I'm done reading it with a rating
     
  5. AnnF

    AnnF First Year

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    May 6, 2007 #5
    Hermione "nastily" telling off Harry for not being friendly to his aunt, is enough reason to skip. Ick.