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Wizard on the Sea of Time by Selenepotter - M

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by selenepotter, Jan 12, 2006.

2/5, 1 vote
  1. selenepotter

    selenepotter First Year

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    Jan 12, 2006 #1
    Title: Wizard on the Sea of Time
    Author: Selenepotter
    Rating: M
    Genre: Crossover
    Crossover: Island on the Sea of Time by S.M. Stirling
    Pairing: Harry/OC
    Status: in progress
    Summery:This fic is related to my "Dudley Dursley and Dies the Fire" crossover fic. This one is a crossover with S. M. Stirling's trilogy that begins with "Island on the Sea of Time". I will reveal what happened to Harry and Luella M/F,Gen,Het,OFC,Oral,Preg,
    Link:http://hp.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=544198798
     
  2. Mrriddler

    Mrriddler High Inquisitor

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    Jan 14, 2006 #2
    Ok, seeing the number of views, I'll say something.

    It's got a decent plot, which could work if better written. And there are some interesting scenes like when Lucella comes in with snakes all over her, but the story's ALL over the place and has enough plot holes to make it look like swiss cheese!! This and your other stories are just really really weird and don't seem to make much sense.
     
  3. silvananoir

    silvananoir First Year

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    May 26, 2006 #3
    Dark, depressing, riled with strife and suffering. Well written and involving, the marks of a good fic.
     
  4. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Aug 13, 2006 #4
    z0mg, another bump!

    Anyone else read this story and willing to give an opinion/rating?
     
  5. Kyp's Avenger

    Kyp's Avenger Fourth Year

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    Aug 13, 2006 #5
    I'd like to look at it, but the link isn't working for me. Is it posted anywhere else?
     
  6. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Aug 13, 2006 #6
    I just deleted the old link and posted the new one.
     
  7. Olfrik

    Olfrik Seventh Year

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    Aug 13, 2006 #7
    The story lacks a plot to follow. The ideas are nice but it's rushed and not that well written. Like said before, the story is all over the place and full of plot holes. 2/5 IMO
     
  8. Kyp's Avenger

    Kyp's Avenger Fourth Year

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    Aug 13, 2006 #8
    Thanks for posting the new link! But..erm...yeah, I'm not a fan of this one. It just doesn't make any sense. 2/5