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Complete A Mother In Law's Love by Perspicacity - M

Discussion in 'Humor' started by Perspicacity, Jan 8, 2011.

4.019229888916/5, 52 votes
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  1. Jormungandr

    Jormungandr Prisoner

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    Jan 21, 2011 #21
    So I finally got around to reading this.

    I mostly liked it: it was very well written, and some elements (such as Gabrielle's jealousy and her toasting of potential 'rivals' and Tonks in general) were very humorous, but there's...just something about the story that I cannot clearly identify that I personally find very unsettling.

    Solid writing, very entertaining. 4/5 from me.
     
  2. Rubicon

    Rubicon High Inquisitor DLP Supporter

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    May 2, 2011 #22
    Just finished this yesterday. I thought it started out great but lost a little something as it went on. The humor become more and more absurd and random and silly, and parts just seemed kind of cliche or uninspired, like gay!Voldemort. On the other hand, the scene between Harry and the goblin might be one of the funniest things I've read in a fanfic. And the writing was very good. All in all, I give it 3.5/5.
     
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