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Abandoned Gene-Spliced Harry by Cypher3au - R

Discussion in 'Humor' started by Ryuu Ken, May 26, 2006.

  1. ip82

    ip82 Prisoner

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    I don't mind any of this. It's humor. It's all good in the name of fun.
     
  2. zEROfrustration

    zEROfrustration Second Year

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    I like it, can't wait for more chapters. It's almost a humor-based Independant!Harry. I like how he takes charge and locks the Death Eaters up in the Chamber of Secrets. Like the pairing as well, FD/HP/NT has some nice possibilities especially with the gene-splicing.
     
  3. ThunderGod

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    Yeah..that did the trick..it did seem a bit like anime...too rushed in that regards

    at least I didn't have to find the words to say it..thanks

    ThunderGod
    :banana: :whipped:
     
  4. zenaku

    zenaku First Year

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    Nice to see a spin-off of the Spliced Senshi thread on the Addventure. Please write more. This is very interesting.
     
  5. Athenia

    Athenia Groundskeeper

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    Some of the ficwad version is a little confusing or abrupt. The version on the Yahoo group is slightly different and in places makes a bit more sense. For instance the scene where Harry confronts Dumbledore about his keys has the same beginning and end, but the middle is completely different and Sirius and Snapes actions make much more sense in the Yahoo version.
     
  6. Treck

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    Slap! You haven't updated!
     
  7. Ryuu Ken

    Ryuu Ken Second Year

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    Dude, give the guy a break. Some of us have personal lives and don't spend all of our time behind a monitor. Nagging an author for an update is just annoying.

    Cypher3au, take all the time you need. Quality over quantity and all that.
     
  8. Niffler Lord

    Niffler Lord Headmaster

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    Nice. I really hope you clear up the cliffie at the end... Or I'll bne forced to hunt you down and beat it out of you... Well probably not. But I will go an pout.

    I like your potrayal of Harry. The sarcasm and wit is well put together and you got the Twins jsut right too. Loved the scene with the Polyjuice.

    Good story. Look forward to more.
     
    Last edited: Jul 19, 2006
  9. radioactive

    radioactive Third Year

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    Not much of cliffhanger, is it? I mean, surely you remember how and where Harry got his Phoenix genes? Something about plucking a phoenix comes to mind... Well, it's the revenge of the firebird. :)
     
  10. DarthBill

    DarthBill The Chosen One DLP Supporter

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    Excellent story. I really look forward to it's future chapters.

    It kind of makes me wish that the Doctors would do something like this in the real world. Useless filthy muggles.
     
  11. Kid Leo

    Kid Leo First Year

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    I thought this story was incredibly funny, after reading so many dark, angry harry fics its good to read one were harry is having fun and is still taking charge of his life.
     
  12. I also followed the story on caer azkaban but there have been no updates for awhile which sucks because it's a great story.
     
  13. Ravage

    Ravage First Year

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    I know it's been a while since someone posted here but I thought that someone should state that cypher3au has updated with a small cookie at the yahoo group.
     
  14. Zield

    Zield Fourth Year

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    Which yahoo group is it at?
     
  15. Darius

    Darius 13/m/box

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    Rosarch's Blots.

    Funny Story, I only read the first few chapters so far though so not much to say.
     
  16. uriel

    uriel Seventh Year DLP Supporter

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  17. Element

    Element Seventh Year

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    Ficwad really need to start up a donation fund for them to get some new fucking servers. One of the most aggravating sites on the internetz.

    Will edit with thoughts on chapter, if I ever get on the damn site.
     
  18. uriel

    uriel Seventh Year DLP Supporter

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    I've downloaded the chapter and uploaded it to megaupload.com
    I'm just not sure if it's against forum rules to provide a link to it without the author's permission.

    Anyway, here's the link:
    http://www.megaupload.com/?d=H7W785HP
     
    Last edited: Jul 28, 2007
  19. Tenebrae

    Tenebrae Second Year

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    For anyone who is still interested in this story: it updated again 3 days ago, with chapter 13.

    It's not exaclty brilliant, compared with the rest of the fic, but I'm hoping the next chapter will be better.
     
  20. The Sour Kraut

    The Sour Kraut Seventh Year

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    As it is allowed in the Library, I'm happily necroing this thread.

    Don't know if you still look at this thread now and then, but I really liked your story, Cypher3au. Yeah, the idea wasn't the best and could've been better executed, but it's a light-hearted and humorous independent!Harry fic and a good read.

    Pacing was just right and I liked Harry being confident enough to flirt without being all macho. I loved the Harry/Fleur/Tonks, because I could see it becoming one of the few well done multis.
    On the other hand, I groaned when I read that you wanted to make it a Harry/Harem fic. Give Harry two women if you want and can pull it off (what you can) but a harem destroys everything because the relationships just get worthless. Only exception is a well done 100% parody, but your fic isn't parody enough for that kind of thing.
    Flirting with every good looking woman is okay as some kind of friendly banter like Harry did with Hermione in Ch8. Fucking every good looking woman is also okay as long as it fits (Black Comedy) but having a relationship with every good looking woman is stupid.
    It would've been better to keep him a women's man and flirty but actually let him stick to Fleur and Tonks and put a little more romance in. That would've been awesome.

    Well, good story with the exception of the points made above.
    4/5 for entertaining me and keeping me from having to write my diploma thesis.

    Any chance it's ever goning to be updated?