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WIP Worthy of Magic by Sage Ra AU

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Henry Persico, Sep 8, 2016.

2.1923100948334/5, 26 votes
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  1. KingRoger

    KingRoger Second Year

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    Oct 10, 2016 #21
    ""Never." he sent the monster crashing into the telly. "Call." Vernon was smashed into the expensive bar crafted in Italy."

    How do you guys define technically good?
    2/5, but only just. The author is just trying so hard to be gritty and shocking that it's almost funny.
     
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